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Ch3zman's Metro Police Force Application

Post by Z3lk0 on Sat Apr 26, 2014 10:36 pm

OOC:


Steam name:
Ch3zman


Steam ID:
0:1:44733527



How long have you been playing on our server?
Around a week, and I've enjoyed it so far


How long have you been serious RPing?
Around 3-4 years, so I've had a lot of experiences

Have you ever been banned from our server?
Nope

Why should we accept you into the MPF? (1 paragraph minimum, a paragraph is 5 sentences, Answer OOCly)
I know all the things it takes to be a great RPer.
I know that the MpF aren't some super-race, just citizens who applied for food, shelter, and other perks.
I know, and enjoy, the lore of HL1 and HL2.
I've played on around 15 servers, none of them have I ever been banned on.
I have experience as a officer on a different server, which is still running.






IC:

Character Name and Physical Description:
Viktor Muller
6'1/German accent/pale faced/ruffled beard/prescription glasses/weaker build/dark green eyes/worn black backpack/worn City 18 uniform/dirty black boots



Character Age:
36



Have you ever been detained by the MPF or been given any negative reputation by an MPF officer?
Never, I've always remained on the good side of the law, and made sure that any of my companions thought the same


Tell me about yourself Citizen, where are you from? What did you do before the war?. (1-2 paragraphs minimum, The longer the better, This is basically a backstory. Answer ICly):
Viktor Muller was born in Germany, 1977. He and his family moved to America fairly early in his life, when he was only 6. Growing up, Viktor was often considered "Anti-social", often remaining alone, rarely going to any events, and frankly, rarely communicated to any other students. He did have two friends though, Johnathan Goldberg and Albert Hunter. They often played in the woods near his house, their particular playing revolving around exploring the woods, finding animals, and hide-and-seek. This gave him quite a few personality perks, such as his ability to run, climb, and a huge sense of independence.  

His life was like this for quite some time, until High school, where things started getting tough. When he was 15, his dad died of cancer, which lead to a "blue" stage in his life. Usually, he excelled in school, but after that, his grades dropped, he became even more anti-social, often ignoring his friends request to hang out. He formed a shell around himself, trying to make himself feel better. It went like this for a year, until he managed to get back on track, conquering his depression, keeping it inside of himself. He excelled in school again, and began being social with his friends. His life was back on track, and he managed to get into college. That is when he decided to become a doctor. Unlike his college colleagues, he would rarely go to parties, often studying day and night, due to his interest in anatomy, and medication. He excelled in college, and managed to get a job when he was 28 (Colleges for becoming a docter are a lot longer).

He worked as a brain surgeon until the attack on the 7 hour war. During the seven hour war, he was instantly compliant, knowing who is stronger than himself. Albert actually complied along with him, but Johnathan decided it was best to make a run for it. He only took three steps out the door before utter obliteration. After the set up of the MpF, and everything was returning "normal" for a civilization, he was moved to City 45. He spent his time getting the Union to like him, often cleaning, doing Civil activities, which gave him quite a reputation. After a while staying there, the Union decided it was best to move him, after he was targeted by a rebel gang. He was moved to City 18, giving him the opportunity to join the Metro Police Force, as the other city never had any shortages. And that's when he applied.



Give a brief 15 line example RP of any of the MPF RP. (I.e. Patrolling, Detaining, Gunfight)
MPF.C18-Helix.03.623 walks out of the Nexus, proceeding to patrol outside.
MPF.C18-Helix.03.623 slowly walks around the Plaza of the city, until he notices a fight going on at the ration terminal
Jimmy Goldenstone says "Give me my ration back, you no good thief!"
Edward Locken responds, a hiss in his voice "Me?! Your the one that stole mine!"
MPF.C18-Helix.03.623 approaches the scene, raising his stunstick up slighty
Jimmy Goldenstone kicks the man in the knees, making him fall over
MPF.C18-Helix.03.623 Raises his stunstick up to his torso, flicking it onto medium
MPF.C18-Helix,03.623 quickly barks orders at the attacker, attempting to sound as intimidating as possible "<:: Citizen, get on the wall, now! ::>"
Jimmy Goldenstone attempts to run away, but is quickly taken down by a assisting unit
MPF.C18-Helix.03.623 Walks over to the offender, pulling him up by his coller, pushing him to the wall
Edward Locken slowly gets up, thanking the Unit for his help
MPF.C18-Helix.03.623 ties the man, checking him for any extra rations, sure enough, he has two rations instead of one, the second one obviously belonging to the other man, as he would have opened it by now
MPF.C18-Helix.03.623 Hands the other man his ration, continuing to follow the steps of detainment
Edward Locken looks appreciative at the Unit, proceeding to walk away
MPF.C18-Helix.03.623 knocks the man unconscious, dragging him to the nexus.
Why should we accept you into the MPF? What makes you stand out from the rest of the loyal citizens in City Eighteen:
Well, I support the community in more ways than cleaning. I always make sure to report problems in the activities of my colleagues. I actively participate in cleaning as well, making sure this City is safe and clean is my top Priority. I also have knowledge on medical procedures, and can preform a surgery in very intense situations.


If you were to be accepted into the MPF, what division would you be interested in? (UNION: Standard Parolling unit | HELIX: Medical | GRID: Mechanical/Technical)
Helix: Medical


What are your desired digits in the MPF? (IE: 532)
616


Are you a loyal citizen of the Union? Explain how you are.
Yes, as said above, I make sure this city is top priority, even over my safety, and I make sure that any law-breakers will be punished. I always makes sure to comply to standards, and hope that I could serve the Union in a better way, by protecting the underlying core of Civilization, Civil stability.


I Viktor Muller Hereby devote myself to the Universal Union and it's Benefactors. I will uphold the highest standards required from me by the MPF and the Union. If I am found guilty of a crime, I accept it and will allow myself to be given whatever punishment that may be. (Beating, Detaining, De-Servicement, Amputation.)

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Re: Ch3zman's Metro Police Force Application

Post by American Patriot on Sun Apr 27, 2014 12:34 am

Right. You wish to join HELIX, correct? Well, then I suppose that from anyone's scrutiny, perhaps you should take mine (HELIX.DvL.451)
to heart. First, I would like to point out the POSITIVES of the post. You have stated and know that MPF units are not gods, which is a good thing to read. You also seem to have put effort into your backstory, and applied it to the field you wish to join in the MPF. The RP situation you had left in the example column was not bad, infact it was good.

The Negatives (Have to be said, I am bluntly honest)

There were grammatical errors (Misplaced punctuation, run-on sentences, sentence fragments) which are of course, something which detract from ANY application. I myself am quite a stickler for those points on applications especially, because they reflect the time and care anyone puts into their application (which NEEDS to be considered at all times).

I suppose another thing that slightly got to me was the definition of "Anti-social" which everyone seems to keep messing up. Anti-social behavior (the traits that characterize Anti-Social Personality Disorder) would actually be seen as quite charming, very talkative and likable, and quite manipulative. Examples of such persons would be: Serial killers, Serial rapists, Confidence men, etc. Being quiet is almost the OPPOSITE of A.S.P.D.

Nonetheless, out of all the applications I have seen in quite a while, you still seem to care more about the story of your character then most. You will learn the CORRECT definitions of the medical terms you will use to catagorize people when you are under my command, future unit, and I expect you to learn from me to you utmost abilities. (And for f*** sake, call me ma'am when you see me, or I will dislike your unit automatically *Just a tip*) For these reasons, I am giving my +Support to this application.

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Re: Ch3zman's Metro Police Force Application

Post by Z3lk0 on Sun Apr 27, 2014 2:21 am

American Patriot wrote:Right. You wish to join HELIX, correct? Well, then I suppose that from anyone's scrutiny, perhaps you should take mine (HELIX.DvL.451)
to heart. First, I would like to point out the POSITIVES of the post. You have stated and know that MPF units are not gods, which is a good thing to read. You also seem to have put effort into your backstory, and applied it to the field you wish to join in the MPF. The RP situation you had left in the example column was not bad, infact it was good.

The Negatives (Have to be said, I am bluntly honest)

There were grammatical errors (Misplaced punctuation, run-on sentences, sentence fragments) which are of course, something which detract from ANY application. I myself am quite a stickler for those points on applications especially, because they reflect the time and care anyone puts into their application (which NEEDS to be considered at all times).

I suppose another thing that slightly got to me was the definition of "Anti-social" which everyone seems to keep messing up. Anti-social behavior (the traits that characterize Anti-Social Personality Disorder) would actually be seen as quite charming, very talkative and likable, and quite manipulative. Examples of such persons would be: Serial killers, Serial rapists, Confidence men, etc. Being quiet is almost the OPPOSITE of A.S.P.D.

Nonetheless, out of all the applications I have seen in quite a while, you still seem to care more about the story of your character then most. You will learn the CORRECT definitions of the medical terms you will use to catagorize people when you are under my command, future unit, and I expect you to learn from me to you utmost abilities. (And for f*** sake, call me ma'am when you see me, or I will dislike your unit automatically *Just a tip*) For these reasons, I am giving my +Support to this application.



Thanks for your feedback and +support! I'm glad that you didn't go easy on me, I really appreciate it, since I'm fairly new to applications.
Once again, thanks for the support (And the head-ups for calling you ma'am  Wink , I always mess that up).

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